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Crouching in the Stream of Consciousness

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Call me melodramatic; well, I hope
I'm not just an ant disturbing the peace.

One image burned onto my brain; marked circa 2011,
I abandoned hope by the side of Erbes Rd in spring and fiddled the handbrake on my bike.
You could say I'm a longtime believer,
gearing up to pass the test
of time. (You did say you were eternal)

I'm a kid in the riverbed, crying for a break
begging my old antlered god to send down some rain
I just want something easy, I shrink at my own thunder
I feel safe in the brush but don't know what to do in water.
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in 2011 i used to drive up erbes smoking cigarettes wishing for someone to hit me. you're not alone and this is wonderful